This is our rough cut which we created half way through the process of creating our promotional package. We used a rough cut in order to gain some peer feeback in a group session one lesson. From our peer feedback we noted that there were both positive and negative points on which we could improve upon whilst editing in the run up to our final cut.
One positive point that was made clear through the peer feedback was that our lipsync was particuarly good as it was in time for the duration of the clip and looked realistic.
A point to improve upon was noted that our shot variety could be improved by using different variations of shot. For example, some medium shots, long shots and more importantly moving shots.
From our peer feedback we could assess how to improve our rough drafting of our video in order to create a more professional, realistic and genre conforming final product.
